INTIMATE RELATIONS
Reviews
07/04/08
Hey there Shelby,
It's 2:51 am in NY and I have just finished reading this wonderful fan-fic and I really enjoyed the atmosphere and sense of longing and romance which you installed in your work. I am not yet 18, but it was very enjoyable at 16, and i loved the way in which you intertwined Rick and Evelyn's special night with Alex's trouble so that in the end it resulted in a smooth and calm ending. There were some typos and grammatical errors but I appreciated the story and its too bad that we as the audience do not see the lives of the characters in the story the way you portray them here. I hope you continue ^^. Take care!
Felicia
Felicia
Chapter 1